Great!
Oh man, that was awesome. I laughed so hard! A little predictable, but that's ok.
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Great!
Oh man, that was awesome. I laughed so hard! A little predictable, but that's ok.
Twas OK
I think the whole style may have some potential. It has sort of an epic feel to it. I think with a lot more practice, you could be one of the forerunners of the flash people on this site. I think that when you're writing the written dialogue, you should proofread it more carefully, because a typo will distract from the story. I think there should be more action, definitely. I liked your choice of music, but I can't really say I don't like it because I kinda wrote it. But back to the style. The font did a lot to enhance the feel of the flash, and so did the old-style drawings and stuff. The guy I think should be made more carefully.
Meh
If you're going to make a flash thing that you actually want people to spend time on, don't make the music a 4 second loop. I couldn't stand to customize that damn van for more than 30 seconds because of the repetative music.
Addicting.
I played this game for around 5 hours one day. I don't know why... it's just fun to play. I went to a lan party, and rather than play lan games, most of the people near me were playing this game and showing off their racer.
Very strange
Hmm... in theory, this is a nice style. Unfortunately, when you have ambient strings playing a half step off from everything else, it just sounds kinda... wrong. Also, I wonder - did you use a drum loop? It just seems kinda out of place. I don't know...
Yeah, i changed the time signiture a little.... No i didnt use a drum loop, but thanks for you review.
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Not bad
It's pretty good for a loop. It kinda reminds me of some sort of insanity or something. Would be great for a scene with a crazy homicidal clown or something. Or maybe something else that I've completely missed.
Nah I don't think you missed anything.
Pretty good!
Well, this song wasn't bad to listen to at all. I could see it as sort of a final showdown between someone and a giant pimp boss or something. Sort of a gangsta/battle music. Pretty cool.
haha thanx, it was an idea that i didnt rele look intot hat much so its not finished thats why its so repetitive
I think the only thing I'm going to submit to NG is music, since I suck at flash. Please contact me if you plan to use my music in a flash, as it's kinda cool to know someone wants to use it :). My email: mostlyharmless@comcast.net
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