Hmm... in theory, this is a nice style. Unfortunately, when you have ambient strings playing a half step off from everything else, it just sounds kinda... wrong. Also, I wonder - did you use a drum loop? It just seems kinda out of place. I don't know...
Yeah, i changed the time signiture a little.... No i didnt use a drum loop, but thanks for you review.
It's pretty good for a loop. It kinda reminds me of some sort of insanity or something. Would be great for a scene with a crazy homicidal clown or something. Or maybe something else that I've completely missed.
Nah I don't think you missed anything.
Well, this song wasn't bad to listen to at all. I could see it as sort of a final showdown between someone and a giant pimp boss or something. Sort of a gangsta/battle music. Pretty cool.
haha thanx, it was an idea that i didnt rele look intot hat much so its not finished thats why its so repetitive
What the heck...
It sounds like you took the Linkin Park song, split it up, added various effects, and stuck it back together. I don't consider that effort. "Loops you made from existing copyrighted songs are not your own original work." Tell me something, did you pay Linkin Park royalties for that song?
yeah =/ guess ur rite. ill do mah own stuff next time. fanx for the "point in the right direction" =)
This song is pretty good considering you're "still new at it". I really like that sort of synth string thing that starts at 11 seconds into the song. I think you should speed up the echo thing that happens at around 4 seconds, because it gets out of sync with the drums. Also, that's a pretty strainge quote in the middle of there.
you're right, that echo noise is out of sync.. need to fix that.
The drum beat was pretty darn cool, but the strings on the left channel are a little too slow on the attack. Also, I think you should have the strings a little less panned off to the sides, for future reference. The string part that comes in on the left around 50 seconds doesn't really stick with the key signature, and the other strings on the right around 1:15 and 1:30 don't either.
I just loved the flow of this song. I've had trouble with flow in my music. I find that sort of overdriven electric piano bassline to add a sort of sad energy to the song. Also, the chords the piano makes sort of give it a futile sound. The major chord in there makes it feel like there's a glimmer of hope, but, no its dreams have been squashed. Great powerful bit of music here.
It was allright.
The guitar melody and harmony sounded ok, but I think you should stay away from having drum hits on every 8th note. It takes away from the quality. Also t'wards the end, there are a few conflicting notes that keep going through it. Back to the drums, maybe use a less ear-abusive drum with a little mor complexity in the beat. It also helps if you have a clear bass drum and snare.
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